2019年6月14号雅思大作文范文（老年人退休工作）

2019年6月14号雅思大作文范文（老年人退休工作）

Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement 退休. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.

Introduction: (Introduce the topic and STATE your opinion. MENTION the reasons supporting your opinion.)

第一段：改写题目+给出自己的观

The recent medical advancement has improved human’s longevity, and even after retirement, the elderly people are still living their life positively. Therefore, I strongly believe that older people ought to involve in jobs positively even they reach their retirement age, as it not only helps the retired people to keep healthy but also the whole society can make use of their personal working experience and skills.

最近的医学进步提高了人类的寿命，即使退休后，老年人仍然积极地生活。因此，我强烈认为老年人即使到了退休年龄也应该积极地参与工作，因为这不仅有助于退休人员保持健康，而且整个社会可以利用他们的个人工作经验和技能。

第二段：

Body Paragraph 1: (EXPLAIN reason 1)

Various studies have proved that working can help people to keep their psychological health after their retirement. The reason is that if an individual suddenly stops in engaging in any economical activities, to some extent, he would feel that he is worthless to the society, and go into depression in some extreme cases. For example, studies in some universities revealed that more than half of older inhabitants who had worked in some big companies still have high-effective brains and functioning body, however, most of them are easy to fall sick after they stop all the economically rewarding activities.

各种研究证明，工作可以帮助人们保持退休后的心理健康。原因是，如果一个人突然停止从事任何经济活动，在某种程度上，他会觉得自己对社会毫无价值，在一些极端的情况下会陷入抑郁。例如，一些大学的研究显示，在一些大公司工作过的老年人中，超过一半的人仍然拥有高效的大脑和功能健全的身体，然而，他们中的大多数人在停止所有经济上有回报的活动后很容易生病。

第三段：

Body Paragraph 2: (EXPLAIN reason 2)

In addition, not allowing the retired people to participate in job activities is harmful to the regional economy. Due to the reason is that these elder people have at least three decades of working experience, which, to some extent, they are more productive than young employees. Moreover, training new employees to replace the elderly staffs demand huge economic costs, and this process often consumes several years. For example, some older employees in multi-international enterprises, especially those from administrative regions, are extremely important to the companies and also the young employees, as they have a deep understanding of the internal working principles of the agencies.

此外，不允许退休人员参加工作活动对地区经济是有害的。原因是这些老年人至少有30年的工作经验，在某种程度上，他们比年轻员工更有生产力。此外，培训新员工来代替老员工需要巨大的经济成本，这个过程往往要花费几年时间。例如，一些跨国企业的老员工，尤其是来自行政区域的老员工，对公司和年轻员工来说都是非常重要的，因为他们对机构内部的工作原理有着深刻的理解。

第四段：

Conclusion:

In conclusion, if individuals are encouraged to work after they retired from their workplaces, this would not only be beneficial to them but also do good to the enterprises. This would eventually bring economical prosperous to the whole society.

总之，如果鼓励个人退休后工作，这不仅对他们有利，而且对企业也有好处。这最终会给整个社会带来经济繁荣。

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